Which of the following is the most effective revision of the sentence below?

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  Question: Which of the following is the most effective revision of the sentence below?

My favorite patterns are the stars and stripes, butterflies, and the flowers.
 
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*A. My favorite patterns are the stars and stripes, the butterflies, and the flowers. Correct!
B. My favorite patterns are stars and stripes, the butterflies, and flowers.
C. My favorite patterns are the stars and stripes, the butterflies, and flowers.
D. The sentence does not need to be revised.
 
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The correct answer is: My favorite patterns are the stars and stripes, the butterflies, and the flowers.

  Question 5 of 10 ( 348709 )
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My family and I enjoy many activities: hiking, skiing, to ride bikes, and picnics.
 
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*A. My family and I enjoy many activities: hiking, skiing, riding bikes, and having picnics. Correct!
B. My family and I enjoy many activities: to hike, to ski, to ride bikes, and picnics.
C. My family and I enjoy many activities: hiking, skiing, riding bikes, and picnics.
D. The sentence does not need to be revised.
 
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The correct answer is: My family and I enjoy many activities: hiking, skiing, riding bikes, and having picnics.

  Question 6 of 10 ( 348710 )
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  Question: Which of the following is the most effective revision of the sentence below?

The sudden downpour flooded not only the stream behind our house but also the river next to the road.
 
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A. The sudden downpour not only flooded the stream behind our house but also the river next to the road.
B. The sudden downpour not only flooded the stream, but also the river, with the stream being behind our house and the river being next to the road.
C. The sudden downpour flooded not only the stream behind our house, but the cars on the road next to the river.
*D. The sentence does not need to be revised. Correct!
 
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The correct answer is: The sentence does not need to be revised.

  Question 7 of 10 ( 348711 )
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A stunning hero, the brave soldier urged his fellows to stand strong, to fulfill their oath, and that not one person be left behind.
 
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*A. A stunning hero, the brave soldier urged his fellows to stand strong, to fulfill their oath, and to not leave even one person behind. Correct!
B. A stunning hero, the brave soldier urged that his fellows should stand strong, fulfill their oath, and leave no person behind.
C. A stunning hero, the brave soldier urged his fellows to stay standing strong, fulfilling their oath, and that not one person be left behind.
D. The sentence does not need to be revised.
 
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The correct answer is: A stunning hero, the brave soldier urged his fellows to stand strong, to fulfill their oath, and to not leave even one person behind.

  Question 8 of 10 ( 348712 )
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This year, my garden has some of the daffodils, tulips, and the roses.
 
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*A. This year, my garden has daffodils, tulips, and roses. Correct!
B. This year, my garden has some daffodils, tulips, and some roses.
C. This year, my garden has the daffodils, white tulips, and the red roses.
D. The sentence does not need to be revised.
 
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The correct answer is: This year, my garden has daffodils, tulips, and roses.

  Question 9 of 10 ( 348713 )
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  Question: Which of the following is the most effective revision of the sentence below?

When I write an essay, I always go through these steps: brainstorming, make an outline, write a rough draft, editing and revising.
 
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*A. When I write an essay, I always go through these steps: brainstorming, making an outline, writing a rough draft, editing and revising. Correct!
B. When I write an essay, I always go through these steps: brainstorming, making an outline, writing a rough draft, edit and revise.
C. When I write an essay, I always go through these steps: brainstorm, make an outline, write a rough draft, editing and revising.
D. The sentence does not need to be revised.
 
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The correct answer is: When I write an essay, I always go through these steps: brainstorming, making an outline, writing a rough draft, editing and revising.

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